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#207: THE BRUTALIST | FILM REVIEW BY AN ARCHITECT

June 13, 2025

Library renovation, Laszlo Toth’s first project for his new client, Harrison Lee Van Buren, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

Over time, architects have appeared in hundreds of movies and TV shows—from Paul Newman to Tom Hanks, Michelle Pfeiffer to Sharon Stone, Keanu Reeves to Elliot Page. But this architect trope is rarely integral to the story. With the 2024 film, The Brutalist, we finally have a movie with an architect being an architect. But I raise an eyebrow or two.

Sure this Oscar-winning movie—3 hours and 34 minutes—is grand and ambitious, an epic sweep of heroism and faltering humanity, like many Oscar films. All blubber aside, I question the accuracy of the architect’s portrayal, the fictional Laszlo Toth—loosely based on the famed architect of the Brutalist movement, Marcel Breuer.

Architect Laszlo Toth, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

Please know this: My movie review is not so much a critique of narrative structure, directorial agenda, and cinematic achievement. Rather, as an architect, it is the details about architecture that vex me.

Architect and design drawing, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

First, the design proclamations are pretentious, even ridiculous, but perhaps it is accurate for the many architects who fall victim to what is mocked as “archi-speak.” Example from a Harvard architect, “Unlike architecture that seeks to articulate understandings about the nature of things through expressive or metaphoric mimings, this remarkable building yields us actionable space.”

Our hero, Laszlo Toth, spews lines like, “Nothing is of its own explanation. Is there a better description of a cube than that of its construction?”

And “…skylights that can also be viewed as demarcations of units of space…”

Or “For its harmony.”

The chapter titles also encourage teasing.

– The Enigma of Arrival
– The Hard Core of Beauty
– The Presence of the Past

Of the script, Dezeen magazine critiqued, “Like the architecture itself, the conversation is cliched nonsense”

Under construction, The Margaret Lee Van Buren Center for Creation and Activity, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

Next, an architect is usually not a general contractor nor a structural engineer. But in The Brutalist, Toth is actually determining the number of construction workers needed and providing construction techniques. Every attorney to an architect will scold said architect for providing liability-stricken “means and methods” for construction. Architects design. The contractor builds. Simple as that.

Architect’s completed work, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

Speaking of the architecture, apparently no architects were consulted for this film. Perhaps one should have been hired to collaborate with the production designer, Judy Becker—competent and compelling, but appearing to have limited formal architectural training. For a movie about boxing, shouldn’t a boxer be consulted? For a movie about cooking, shouldn’t a chef be consulted.

right: Under construction, The Margaret Lee Van Buren Center for Creation and Activity, film still from The Brutalist, 2024; left: This image is not from the movie, but is “The Brutalist Scale Model,” $75 for the limited edition from the A24 shop.

We see familiar references to the work of Louis Kahn, Mies van der Rohe, and Paul Rudolph, but the resulting architecture, particularly the “visionary” community center—Toth’s career breakthrough project—is mildly interesting at its best, clunky at its worst. For that scene of the big presentation, I doubt any architect would walk into a public hearing with such a clumsy-scaled, crudely-made, white cardboard model.

The creative process, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

Lastly, if the actor, Adrien Brody, is going to use architect’s drafting tools, he should use them correctly, holding them, drawing with them. It’s like watching a movie where the assassin holds his gun upside down. And I don’t know many colleagues that draw with fat sticks of black charcoal. Artistic-looking on screen, yes, but practical?

I did sympathize with the sensitive, customer-serving architect who gets abused by the self-serving, affluent client—in this case (spoiler alert), literal rape.

Architect and his insidious client, film still from The Brutalist, 2024

I liked and disliked The Brutalist. Though I found fault in the portrayal of Laszlo Toth as an architect, I supported much of his depiction: thoughtful, creative, and bold, but also self-absorbed, uncompromising, and egotistical. Best to sum it up as Fountainhead-syndrome.

#74: LEARNING FROM FIGURE DRAWING: THE BIG PICTURE

November 24, 2017

Three diverse techniques of figure drawings: left by Clara Lieu; middle by Liz Hill; right by Anthony Poon

So as teenagers in figure drawing class, we all had that moment when the beautiful model dropped her robe to the floor and stood there in all her naked glory, surrounded by students in awe and dropped jaws. Then our teacher said to study the model and draw.

Figure drawing studio (photo from artconnect.com)

As awkward as it was, as inappropriate as it might have been for us young artists, we grinned and took in the nude figures before us. We learned to observe—have the details of the body enter our eyes and brains and come out of our hands. With black and white charcoal pencils, we sketched the human subject ten feet in front of us, onto newsprint ten inches in front of us.

I continue this exercise of observation and recording as I draw regularly in my sketchbook, whether it is a group of people, a bowl of fruit, or a composition of buildings. But what I learned most from my figure drawing class was seeing The Big Picture.

In figure drawing, not seeing The Big Picture can be catastrophic. Our art teacher instructs us to lightly glide our hand over our paper, imagining how we might capture the entire figure in broad strokes. But we are taught to not yet touch the paper with our pencils. As our hand gracefully outlines the figure over and over again without actually producing a visible charcoal line on the paper, our art instructor finally commands, “Begin!” Without a break in motion, our pencils touch the paper and the general profile of the nude body is softly outlined.

Figure drawing, think Big Picture first (photo from hoodstreetartcenter.com)

Though this sounds like artistic gibberish, imagine the common disasters that could occur. An eager student might focus on the model’s foot, carefully drawing each toe, highlighting the textures and shadows. As this sophomoric student moves up the body slowly, drawing the legs, the waist, the torso . . . “Oh damn! I don’t have enough room on my sheet of paper to draw the model’s shoulders and head!”

This unfortunate result happens a lot in class. And in life as well.

The Big Picture master planning sketches and models for MacArthur Place, Santa Ana, California, by Anthony Poon (w/ MPFP)

We should all be in motion, energetically outlining the total impression of our existence, and not simply confronting daily details. Every self-help book, good or bad, and every business advice blog suggest that you set your ten year goals, then your five year goals that get to the ten years goals. Then you are to identify the annual goals that get to your five year goals, and your monthly goals to . . . , well, you get the idea.

If you simply focus on what you are doing each day without thought to the overall arc of The Bigger Picture, you are only drawing the foot or a toe. Even if this foot is perfectly represented, later in life you will realize that you never even thought about the rest of the body.

Like figure drawing, a concept sketch for Staples Center, Los Angeles, California, by Anthony Poon and Greg Lombardi (w/ NBBJ)
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